Thursday, July 29, 2010

the sting


when did free
become
(read the small print)
not free
the lure, the balm
the bomb, the catch
the other shoe,
pacing like a lion
growling,
dangling
which smacks you
in the head
as you are looking
for mysteriously
disappearing
expired coupons
illuminated
like a circus clown
at the check out
fumbling to buy
the new, not new
and really quite
unimproved,
improved…
lucy meskill

2 comments:

  1. caught by consumption
    overpowering some days
    lured by promises ...

    well said, lucy. the photo adds a wonderful texture to your words. you're the bomb!
    <3<3<3

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  2. consumption consumes / the lure of a promised land / at a store near you ... #haiku

    beautifully woven words and image, sweetie! <3

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